Why filter words are slowing down your thriller – by Louise Harnby…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

Are your thriller’s sentences front-loaded with filter words? If so, you could be slowing your reader down.

This post explains what filter words are, how they affect a sentence and how to decide whether to include them or ditch them.

What’s in this post …

Read on to find out more about:

  • Why the start of a sentence is important.
  • What filter words are.
  • How filter words reduce momentum.
  • How filter words make space for reflection.

Continue reading HERE

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