by Doug Lewars
“We can’t have far to go,” he said.
“It might be farther then you think,” she said. “After all, we did have to detour.”
“True, but we’ve come a long way, detour or no detour,” he said, “And I’m pretty certain that it’s just beyond the next hill.”
“Well,” she said with a shrug, “There’s only one way to find out.”
Four sentences of dialogue that might appear in a story. Four sentences and every one of them contains the verb ‘said’. Yuck.
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